Practising for a Wiki on LotusElan.net.
Posted: Wed May 22, 2013 12:30 am
Practising for a Wiki on LotusElan.net.
SpyderFan (Alan Thomas) has pointed out that the entry on the big Wikipedia currently has the following paragraphs as the introduction to the page called Lotus Elan (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lotus_Elan).
I think most of us will recognise that there are errors in that paragraph and it is clumsy, so let's have suggestions in this topic as to better wording for that intro paragraph. A quick look at the history file (http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?tit ... on=history)of that page shows that it is pretty much what was written by the original page creator and has not been corrected since.
When we have a consensus here, one of us can go in and replace that crappy intro on Wikipedia with our version.
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Lots of other paragraphs on that page need amendment too, but lets just try get that intro better first.
SpyderFan (Alan Thomas) has pointed out that the entry on the big Wikipedia currently has the following paragraphs as the introduction to the page called Lotus Elan (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lotus_Elan).
Lotus Elan is the name of two convertible cars and one fixed head coup? produced by Lotus Cars. The original Type 26, 26R Racing version (of the S1 Elan), 36R Racing version (of the S2 Elan), 36 Fixed Head Coupe, 45 Drop Head Coupe, and the "Type 50" +2 Coupe, circa 1962 to 1975, are commonly known as the '60s Elans. The Type M100 from 1989 to 1995, is also commonly known as the 1990s Elan.
I think most of us will recognise that there are errors in that paragraph and it is clumsy, so let's have suggestions in this topic as to better wording for that intro paragraph. A quick look at the history file (http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?tit ... on=history)of that page shows that it is pretty much what was written by the original page creator and has not been corrected since.
When we have a consensus here, one of us can go in and replace that crappy intro on Wikipedia with our version.
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Lots of other paragraphs on that page need amendment too, but lets just try get that intro better first.